Week 11 Objectives - First draft

Self Evaluation Template

1) What score do you think you deserve? Here is the rubric:

2 points - The first draft is thoughtful and a good start to an effective persuasive essay. It demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument.

1 point - The student completes a first draft that demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument

0 points - The first draft is inadequate

I deserve 2 point.  I finished my first draft with enough research to support my argument. But my writing is not enough to draw attention because I couldn't find any examples to use. However, It doesn't matter, I think, on the 1st draft.

2) What did you do well?

I found information as much as I can. My first draft is based on facts.

arguments are based off of opinions and personal feelings.
3) What could you have done better?

I should add my thoughts more as I used too many advanced researches especially at the part of instruction for teachers. I couldn't make my own words.

4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?

Confirmation. I used reliable advanced researches.

5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?

Narration. It's not powerful.

6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better? My narration is strong. I do a good 

I will try to insist my own thoughts supporting my argument logically. Then, I need to think carefully about my topic. I need deep consideration.