2014년 12월 8일 월요일

Week 14 Peer Review


Peer review for 김희정

5 points
  • Technically perfect
  • Follows the classical argument
  • Displays an interesting and unique perspective on a highly specialized topic
  • Thought provoking and captivating
  • Clearly the product of extensive drafting and research

4 points
  • Technically perfect
  • Follows the classical argument
  • Displays a unique perspective on a highly specialized topic
  • Clearly the product of thorough drafting and research
3 points
  • Follows the classical argument
  • Displays a unique perspective on a highly specialized topic
  • Some evidence of drafting and research

2 points
  • Displays a unique perspective on a highly specialized topic
0 points
  • Incomplete or inadequate
Grade
According to the rubric above, what grade would you give this essay? Why?
5 points. Her topic is attractive and I think she is good convincer. 

How does this essay need to improve to get a better grade?
Grammar errors and there shouldn't be any question.

Thesis
What is the thesis?
Shutdown law is unnecessary in Korea

Is the thesis clear and debatable?
Yes.

If you (The reviewer) wrote this essay, how would you have written the thesis?
Shutdown law is inefficient in Korea.

Any other thoughts?
It will be better to use more appealing examples.

Classical Argument
Can you easily identify the 5 parts of the classical argument? If no, what parts are missing?
Yes.

Does the introduction catch your attention? Does it comfortably lead to the thesis? 
She used shocking real story.

Does the narration give all the necessary background information to understand the topic?
She explained the standard of game addiction and shutdown law. I think it is enough.

Does the confirmation adequately support the thesis?
Yes

Does the refutation and concession address a realistic counterpoint? Does it adequately dispute the counterpoint, or respond in a reasonable manner?
Yes. It is adequate and possible. But I think she should refute them using more supports.

Does the conclusion summarize the article and address the larger significance of the thesis? 
Yes, she did well.

What suggestions do you have for improving the classical argument structure?
She should improve her conclusion. Her conclusion is just filled with expert's opinion. She should add more her opinion.

Persuasion
When you started reading the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis? 
I totally agree.

When you finished the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis?
I agree.

If your mind changed, why? What parts of the essay were persuasive?
I didn't change my mind.

How could the author enhance the persuasive parts of their essay?
There are many examples that Korean pro-gamer can't continue in world's match because of Shut-down. It will be more appealing.

Research
Is the author using research effectively? 
Yes.

Is the research from appropriate sources?
Yes. 

Are the sources obvious?
She revealed the sources obviously.

Are the pieces of evidence relevant to the thesis or essay?
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Are there any parts of the essay that need evidence to support the claims?
No. You did well ;)

2014년 12월 1일 월요일

Week 16 Final Draft

 Sam and Agnes who are the best friends had taken the same classes and spent the same amount of time in studying. Ironically, Agnes got higher grades than Sam. Of course, their innate capacity to learn may differ. However, the reason of difference between his and her grades, generally, is that she studied more effectively than him. Effective learning is important for students, so teachers work hard every day preparing the lesson to give the right information to students, to draw attention on them, to make a theme fun and to make their explanation excellent. All things they care about is important for effective learning in class. However, they missed one of the most important factors for their class. When teachers plan their lesson, they have to focus on the mood of learners. The emotion that one feel at a day will differ; sad, happy, delightful, or, excited and the day depends on their mood. For example, if you fought with your spouse in this morning and you became too angry, you could not concentrate on your tasks and it will be impossible to treat others well. Not only your feeling has an effect on the day, but the student's mood has a great effect on the class. Thus, teachers would catch the class's different moods like depressed, cool, noisy, or calm. It is important for teachers to catch the moods of the classes because the effect of learning depends on the mood of the students; emotion drives attention, which in turn drives learning and memory. In other words, teachers should lead the student's emotion for effective learning. I suggest that teachers should help students to study 'effectively' without wasting their time.

 One of the most important body parts is the brain and among the functions of the brain, I guess, the emotion is the most marvelous ability; maybe it is not notable because emotion has a great role in our lives and control us. Given this, it is only fair to make such claim. Christian Gerlach, who works in Learning Lab Denmark said; when the 'cognitive revolution' began three decades ago, emotions were not given much attention, however, in the last ten to fifteen years, this picture has clearly changed and increasing number of studies are examining the role of emotions on nearly all aspects of everyday cognition. Especially I want to talk about the role of emotion in education. In fact, Robert Sylvester said that  new developments in cognitive science are unraveling the mysteries of emotions; the findings have much to teach us about how students do—or do not—learn.
 Before we think about how emotion is related to education, let's think about the history of learning and psychology which help us to understand it. Learning has changed from the perspective of psychology. (Brian Butterworth) Think about B. F. Skinner's behaviorism, at the beginning of the last century behaviorism came to the fore of scientific investigations. The first behaviorists considered the brain an uninteresting black box, from which the only interesting output was the behavior; where, in the final analysis, subjective experience can be described simply as patterns by providing proper reward and punishment is administered. From this viewpoint, there has been a lot of educational reinforcement; incentives to make students study hard. Students got punishment for bad grades or disreputable practices while they were praised for the better grade or the done thing. It may have a temporary impact on the student's behavior, however, to a large extent behaviorists misguided teachers to think that conditioning can describe all learning processes in the human brain. A lot of studies trying to prove behaviorism failed and much learning started to depend on internal motivation and emotion rather than external reward. Such old-fashioned educational approach also have been changed following that current.

 We have learned the changed perception of emotion and the style of education which had changed following the history of psychology. Then, it's turned to discover how emotion and learning are related. Cognitive neuroscience has demonstrated a relationship between emotion and learning.
1. Emotions play a regulatory role in memory consolidation. In other words, the atmosphere in which students get knowledge is important for knowledge acquisition. Various observations discovered that people can remember emotionally arousing events more vividly than others. According to Denis Pare, BLA(basolateral complex of amygdala; the basolateral complex consists of the lateral, basal and accessory-basal nuclei of the amygdala) facilitates memory consolidation in a wide variety of emotionally arousing tasks, whether their affective valence is positive or negative. In addition, some experts (Reinhard Pekrun) argue that the idea that positive emotions always have positive effects and negative emotions always have negative effects is not correct. Certain negative emotions such as anxiety, shame, and anger can enhance performance in specific cases.
2. Emotion bias our cognitive information processing style. Petra C. Schmid mentioned that affect-as-information theory (Clore et al., 2001; Schwarz, 1990) suggests that people in a sad mood process information more deliberately and search for specific information before making a judgment. People in a happy mood use a more automatic or heuristic information processing style and judgments are made on the basis of an overall impression.
3. According to Christian Gerlach, emotion constitutes a vital part of decision making, even when it is based on rational cost-benefit analysis. The unique social information conveyed by each discrete emotion. In decision making, individuals use interdependent others' emotional expressions to make sense of ambiguous and uncertain social situations, and the cooperative or competitive nature of the social situation fundamentally influences the interpersonal effects of emotions. 
 We can reason that using both positive emotions and negative emotions in class is more helpful for effective learning than normal teaching method. Emotions are so varied that the effects of them also diverse. It will be better for teachers to control student's mood depending on the situation. For example, too active students are likely to miss the detailed, but important information. Thus, teachers should make the class's atmosphere calm and nervous to help the students perform well in statistics.

 Teachers can cause certain emotions in various ways. These following factors that are under the control of educators likely are important for the development of students' emotions (Reinhard Pekrun; Zeidler). 
 First, improve students' perceived control. Lack of structure, clarity, and excessive task demands are factors that enhance students' anxiety. Therefore, teachers should structure instructions well and explain clearly. By implication, adaptive student emotions likely can be fostered, and maladaptive emotions reduced, by raising the cognitive quality of instruction.
 Second, support autonomy and self-regulated learning. Learning environments supporting students' self-regulated learning can be assumed to increase their sense of control and related positive emotions. In addition, such environments can foster positive emotions by meeting students' needs for autonomy. However, these beneficial effects probably depend on the match between students' competence and individual need for academic autonomy. In the case of a mismatch, loss of control and negative emotions can result. In short, teachers should attend to matching demands for autonomy to students' competencies and needs.
 Third, set goal structures and achievement expectations carefully. Goal structures and grading practices determine students' opportunities for experiencing success and perceiving control, thus influencing their emotions. Specifically, competitive goal structures imply that some students experience success, whereas others have to experience failure, thus increasing levels of anxiety and hopelessness. Therefore, educators should adapt expectancy to students' competencies and should refrain from using goal structures that induce individual competition between students.
 Finally, give feedback and consequences of achievement. Research suggests that cumulative failure feedback is a major factor underlying students' test anxiety (Zeidner, 1998). Success experiences likely strengthen perceived control and related positive emotions, whereas repeated failure can undermine subjective control and, therefore, instigate negative emotions. In addition, the perceived consequences of success and failure are important. Positive future-related student emotions can be increased if academic success is seen to produce beneficial long-term outcomes (such as future occupational chances). Negative outcomes of academic failure, by contrast, can increase students' achievement-related anxiety and hopelessness. By implication, providing success experiences, defining mistakes as opportunities for learning rather than as a personal failure, and linking attainment to beneficial outcomes also is important for helping students to develop adaptive emotions
 Given these facts, teachers can lead the proper feeling for effective learning. 
 In practicing these instructions, you should pay attention when you try to arouse emotions. Quite some students have a negative attitude toward learning when they have experienced failure in learning. In addition, the mere prospect of being asked to read aloud in class is enough to freeze some kids, rather than to understand the text. These children are likely to develop a phobia and prevalence of anxiety of depression that lead to late development. In contrast, too much positive mood can lead students to be too much optimistic. I said that both positive and negative feelings are necessary, but it doesn't mean that all kinds of emotions are good at learning. Therefore, teachers must be aware of the consequences of the way they teach.

The strong effects of emotion have been proving for many other aspects. People are doubtful of whether teacher can lead the emotions of students. Many people would say they can't because we even cannot control emotion ourselves. It is because they think of emotion as arising out of the blue, unbidden, with a life of its own. It would seem that emotions are just not the kinds of things that can be willed into existence. However, according to the James Gross, it becomes concerned when we try to imagine a single person regulating his or her emotions. In this case, we should consider the interaction between brain systems and we should distinguish the subject that controls the emotion from the subject which is controlled emotion. However, if something is being regulated, it isn't much of a mystery because the subjects are explicit. Consider a teacher who calls an out-of-control child in the classroom. The teacher can change the atmosphere of the class from disturbance to calmness, and it affects the mood of the children. Although all of the children's feelings were not changed, emotional contagion(the tendency for two individuals to emotionally converge) can occur. The other way to change the students' feelings that can be explained by using emotional contagion and observational learning is that teachers' enthusiasm can facilitate students' adoption of positive emotions. Emotional contagion occurs not only among students, but also between teacher and student. According to the research on emotional contagion in the classroom(Timothy P. Motet, Steven A. Bebe), students' emotional responses are positively related to the perceived emotional responses of their instructor. To sum up, we can control the emotions; the emotions can be also controlled by teachers and others can lead proper feelings for effective learning by manipulating atmosphere and intending to emotional contagion.


Students learn and teachers should help students learn in the most effective way. They can do it by using emotions of students. Teachers can lead the emotions for effective learning. There are several ways to arouse proper emotion for the best learning. That's what teachers should keep in mind. In the past, teachers used to give some incentives to students to enhance their motives and performance. However, many experiments have proved that students learning is not related to external reward, but it is related to internal reward. In addition, it is a recent trend that scientists are paying attention to the power of emotion and it is time for teachers to change. Consider the reason why Agnes and Sam got different score although they made a same effort. The consequence of their efforts will be different according to the proper use of their mood. Emotions play a regulatory role in memory consolidation and information processing style. And of course it has an effect on concentration and motivation. In trying to create a proper academic atmosphere, teachers don't need to be worry whether they can lead the emotions of the other people. Emotion is the basic facts of human, which can be caused by the situation that you are in, or the people you are with. It means that people can change someone's emotion intentionally. Teachers might be embarrassed when the students don't concentrate on their work and their lesson. Then, it would be better for them to use these instructions in their class, then, they don't have to worry anymore. To try to catch students' emotions and follow the instructions is the best way to help children to save time otherwise they spend uselessly, growing effectiveness of learning. When emotion arousal is applied to the classroom, it not only drives the learning process, but also allow educators to energize and enliven the minds of students. It will be up to the professionals to develop and use the strategies that bring the emotion-based learning to students. That will be a fascinating and exciting challenge to meet. 
 Incorporating emotion into classroom lessons will make teaching easier.






References



Brian Butterworth, Anna Bevan (2004). Understanding and emotion in mathematics learning
http://www.oecd.org/edu/ceri/34097347.pdf
Robert Sylwester (1994). How Emotions Affect Learning http://www.ascd.org/publications/educational-leadership/oct94/vol52/num02/How-Emotions-Affect-Learning.aspx
Skinner, B.F. (1938). The behavior of organisms: an experimental analysis
http://psycnet.apa.org/psycinfo/1939-00056-000
Denis Pare (2003). Role of the basolateral amygdala in memory consolidation
http://sni-seminars.stanford.edu/reprints/Pare2.pdf
Reinhard Pekrun (2009). Student Emotions 
http://www.education.com/reference/article/student-emotions/
Moshe Zeidner (2013). Test anxiety; The state of the Art 
http://books.google.co.kr/books?hl=ko&lr=&id=oYBb7iLNiTkC&oi=fnd&pg=PA1&dq=Zeidner,+M.+(1998).+Test+anxiety&ots=g9KE62gJoj&sig=i-CjeShyKuxJQgG8ublJNnwTRtc#v=onepage&q=Zeidner%2C%20M.%20(1998).%20Test%20anxiety&f=false

2014년 11월 10일 월요일

Week 13 - Second Draft

 Every day you, teachers, might work hard preparing the lesson to give the right information to students, to draw attention on them, to make a theme fun and to make your explanation excellent. All things you care about is important for effective learning in class. However, you missed one of the most important factors for your class. When you plan your lesson, our task as teachers is to focus on the mood of learners. How do you feel today? The answer will differ; sad, happy, delightful, or, excited and the day depends on your mood. For example, if you fought with your spouse in this morning and you became too angry, you could not concentrate on your tasks and it will be impossible to treat others well kindly.  Not only your feeling has an effect on the day, but the student's mood has a great effect on the class. Then, are you noticing your students' feelings? You would catch the class's different moods like depressed, cool, noisy, or calm. Then, why teachers should check their feelings? The effect of learning depends on the mood of students, so It will be better to know the student's feeling. It also affects your lesson. Emotion is important in education because it drives attention, which in turn drives learning and memory. Then, can we, teachers, use them appropriately in the class? The topic of this essay is that 'Can teachers lead the student's emotion for effective learning?'. I suggest that teachers should help students to study 'effectively' without wasting their time and this is the reason I decided my topic like that. 

 One of the most important body parts is the brain and among the functions of the brain, I guess, the emotion is the most marvelous ability; maybe it is not notable because emotion has a great role in our lives and control us. Given this, it is only fair to make such claim. Christian Gerlach, who works in Learning Lab Denmark said; when the 'cognitive revolution' began three decades ago, emotions were not given much attention, however, in the last ten to fifteen years, this picture has clearly changed and increasing number of studies are examining the role of emotions on nearly all aspects of everyday cognition. Especially I want to talk about the role of emotion in education. In fact, Robert Sylvester said that  new developments in cognitive science are unraveling the mysteries of emotions; the findings have much to teach us about how students do—or do not—learn.
 Before we think about how emotion is related to education, let's think about the history of learning and psychology which help us to understand it. Learning has changed from the perspective of psychology. (Brian Butterworth) Think about B. F. Skinner's behaviorism, at the beginning of the last century behaviorism came to the fore of scientific investigations. The first behaviorists considered the brain an uninteresting black box, from which the only interesting output was the behavior; where, in the final analysis, subjective experience can be described simply as patterns by providing proper reward and punishment is administered.
 From this viewpoint, there has been a lot of educational reinforcement; incentives to make students study hard. Students got punishment for bad grades or disreputable practices while they were praised for the better grade or the done thing. It may have a temporary impact on the student's behavior, however, to a large extent behaviorists misguided teachers to think that conditioning can describe all learning processes in the human brain. A lot of studies trying to prove behaviorism failed and much learning started to depend on internal motivation and emotion rather than external reward. Such old-fashioned educational approach also have been changed following that current.

 We have learned the changed perception of emotion  and the style of education which had changed following the history of psychology. Then, it's turned to discover how emotion and learning are related. Cognitive neuroscience has demonstrated a relationship between emotion and learning.
 1. Emotions play a regulatory role in memory consolidation. In other words, the atmosphere in which students get knowledge is important for knowledge acquisition. Various observations discovered that people can remember emotionally arousing events more vividly than others. According to Denis Pare, BLA(basolateral complex of amygdala; the basolateral complex consists of the lateral, basal and accessory-basal nuclei of the amygdala) facilitates memory consolidation in a wide variety of emotionally arousing tasks, whether their affective valence is positive or negative. In addition, some experts (Reinhard Pekrun) argue that the idea that positive emotions always have positive effects and negative emotions always have negative effects is not correct. Certain negative emotions such as anxiety, shame, and anger can enhance performance in specific cases.
 2. Emotion bias our cognitive information processing style. Petra C. Schmid mentioned that affect-as-information theory (Clore et al., 2001; Schwarz, 1990) suggests that people in a sad mood process information more deliberately and search for specific information before making a judgment. People in a happy mood use a more automatic or heuristic information processing style and judgments are made on the basis of an overall impression.
 3. According to Christian Gerlach, emotion constitutes a vital part of decision making, even when it is based on rational cost-benefit analysis. The unique social information conveyed by each discrete emotion. In decision making, individuals use interdependent others' emotional expressions to make sense of ambiguous and uncertain social situations, and the cooperative or competitive nature of the social situation fundamentally influences the interpersonal effects of emotions. 
 We can reason that using both positive emotions and negative emotions in class is more helpful for effective learning than normal teaching method. It will be better for teachers to control student's mood depending on the situation. 

 Teachers can cause certain emotions in various ways. These following factors that are under the control of educators likely are important for the development of students' emotions (Reinhard Pekrun; Zeidler). 
 First, improve students' perceived control. Lack of structure, clarity, and excessive task demands are factors that enhance students' anxiety. Therefore, you should structure instructions well and explain clearly. By implication, adaptive student emotions likely can be fostered, and maladaptive emotions reduced, by raising the cognitive quality of instruction.
 Second, support autonomy and self-regulated learning. Learning environments supporting students' self-regulated learning can be assumed to increase their sense of control and related positive emotions. In addition, such environments can foster positive emotions by meeting students' needs for autonomy. However, these beneficial effects probably depend on the match between students' competence and individual need for academic autonomy. In the case of a mismatch, loss of control and negative emotions can result. In short, teachers should attend to matching demands for autonomy to students' competencies and needs.
 Third, set goal structures and achievement expectations carefully. Goal structures and grading practices determine students' opportunities for experiencing success and perceiving control, thus influencing their emotions. Specifically, competitive goal structures imply that some students experience success, whereas others have to experience failure, thus increasing levels of anxiety and hopelessness. Therefore, educators should adapt expectancy to students' competencies and should refrain from using goal structures that induce individual competition between students.
 Finally, give feedback and consequences of achievement. Research suggests that cumulative failure feedback is a major factor underlying students' test anxiety (Zeidner, 1998). Success experiences likely strengthen perceived control and related positive emotions, whereas repeated failure can undermine subjective control and, therefore, instigate negative emotions. In addition, the perceived consequences of success and failure are important. Positive future-related student emotions can be increased if academic success is seen to produce beneficial long-term outcomes (such as future occupational chances). Negative outcomes of academic failure, by contrast, can increase students' achievement-related anxiety and hopelessness. By implication, providing success experiences, defining mistakes as opportunities for learning rather than as a personal failure, and linking attainment to beneficial outcomes also is important for helping students to develop adaptive emotions
 Given these facts, teachers can lead the proper feeling for effective learning. 
 In practicing these instructions, you should pay attention when you try to arouse emotions. Quite some students have a negative attitude toward learning when they have experienced failure in learning. In addition, the mere prospect of being asked to read aloud in class is enough to freeze some kids, rather than to understand the text. These children are likely to develop a phobia and prevalence of anxiety of depression that lead to late development. In contrast, too much positive mood can lead students to be too much optimistic.  I said that both positive and negative feelings are necessary, but it doesn't mean that all kinds of emotions are good at learning. Therefore, you must be aware of the consequences of the way you teach.

The strong effects of emotion have been proving for many other aspects. However, some people would wonder that can teachers lead the emotions of students. Many people would say not; we even cannot control emotion ourselves. It is because they think of emotion as arising out of the blue, unbidden, with a life of its own. How could one will oneself to feel love, happiness, or any other emotion? It would seem that emotions are just not the kinds of things that can be willed into existence. However, according to the James Gross, it becomes concerned when we try to imagine a single person regulating his or her emotions. In this case, we should consider the interaction between brain systems and we should distinguish the subject that controls the emotion from the subject which is controlled emotion. However, if something is being regulated, it isn't much of a mystery because the subjects are explicit. Consider a teacher who calls an out-of-control child in the classroom. The teacher can change the atmosphere of the class from disturbance to calmness, and it affects the mood of the children. Although all of the children's feelings were not changed, emotional contagion(the tendency for two individuals to emotionally converge) can occur. The other way to change the students' feelings that can be explained by using emotional contagion and observational learning is that teachers' enthusiasm can facilitate students' adoption of positive emotions. Emotional contagion occurs not only among students, but also between teacher and student. According to the research on emotional contagion in the classroom(Timothy P. Motet, Steven A. Bebe), students' emotional responses are positively related to the perceived emotional responses of their instructor. To sum up, we can control the emotions; the emotions can be also controlled by teachers and others can lead proper feelings for effective learning by manipulating atmosphere and intending to emotional contagion.

Students learn and teachers should help students learn in the most effective way. They can do it by using emotions of students. Teachers can lead the emotions for effective learning. There are several ways to arouse proper emotion for the best learning. That's what teachers should keep in mind. In the past, teachers used to give some incentives to students to enhance their motives and performance. However, many experiments have proved that students learning is not related to external reward, but it is related to internal reward. In addition, it is a recent trend that scientists are paying attention to the power of emotion and it is time for teachers to change. Consider this; why same student does work well, some day while he or she performs some day poorly? The degree of study of a student is not always same because learning depends on emotion. Emotions play a regulatory role in memory consolidation and information processing style. And of course it has an effect on concentration and motivation as we basically know. Do not worry whether you can lead the emotion of the other people. Emotion, the basic facts of human, is a feeling such as happinesslovefearangeror hatredwhich can be caused by the situation that you are in or the people you are with. It means that people(included you) can intend to change someone's emotion. You might be embarrassed when the students don't concentrate on their work and your lesson. Use these instructions in your class, and you don't have to worry anymore. Try to catch students' emotions and follow the instructions, it is the best way to help children to save time otherwise they spend uselessly, growing effectiveness of learning. How easy it is to become a great teacher!


References



Brian Butterworth, Anna Bevan (2004). Understanding and emotion in mathematics learning
Robert Sylwester (1994). How Emotions Affect Learning
Skinner, B.F. (1938). The behavior of organisms: an experimental analysis
Denis Pare (2003). Role of the basolateral amygdala in memory consolidation
Reinhard Pekrun (2009). Student Emotions 
Moshe Zeidner (2013). Test anxiety; The state of the Art

2014년 10월 27일 월요일

Week 11 Objectives - First draft

Self Evaluation Template

1) What score do you think you deserve? Here is the rubric:
2 points - The first draft is thoughtful and a good start to an effective persuasive essay. It demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument.
1 point - The student completes a first draft that demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument
0 points - The first draft is inadequate
I deserve 2 point.  I finished my first draft with enough research to support my argument. But my writing is not enough to draw attention because I couldn't find any examples to use. However, It doesn't matter, I think, on the 1st draft.

2) What did you do well?

I found information as much as I can. My first draft is based on facts.
arguments are based off of opinions and personal feelings.
3) What could you have done better?

I should add my thoughts more as I used too many advanced researches especially at the part of instruction for teachers. I couldn't make my own words.

4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?

Confirmation. I used reliable advanced researches.

5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?

Narration. It's not powerful.

6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better? My narration is strong. I do a good 

I will try to insist my own thoughts supporting my argument logically. Then, I need to think carefully about my topic. I need deep consideration.

2014년 10월 26일 일요일

First draft

 Everyday you might work hard preparing the lesson to give a right information to students, to draw attention of them, to make a theme fun and to make your explanation excellent. All things you care about is important for effective learning in class. However you missed one of the most important factor for your class. When planning teaching for learning, our task as teachers, is to focus on the mood of learners. How do you feel today? The answer will differ; sad, happy, delightful, excited, or etc. The day depends on your mood. For example, if you fought with your spouse at this morning and you became too angry to assume that you are normal, you could not do your tasks and treat others well.  Not only your feeling has an effect on the day, but students' mood has a great effects on the class. Then, are you noticing your students' feelings? You could catch the mood of the class like depressed, cool, noisy, or calm. The effect of learning depends on the mood of students. It will be better to know the students feeling because it affects your lesson. Emotion is important in education because it drives attention, which in turn drives learning and memory. There have been a lot of researches on the mood and learning and most teachers can capture the mood of students well. Then, how can we, teachers, can use them appropriately in the class? The topic of this essay is that 'How students' various emotions affect the lesson and how teachers lead the best feeling for effective learning?' . And the reason why I decided the topic like this is that although there are lots of studies about feeling and learning as I mentioned before, there is not enough information or instructions about how to use them properly in class. 

 Among your body parts which one do you think is a king of the whole parts? To me, it is a brain because brain do so many things for our body; it controls our muscles(legs and hands) and all of our marvel thoughts come from our brain. Among the functions of the brain, I guess, the emotion is the most marvelous ability; maybe it is not ability because emotion has a great role in our lives and control us as if they were king. Given this, it is only fair to do such claim. Christian Gerlach who works in Learning Lab Denmark said; when the 'cognitive revolution' began three decades ago, emotions were not given much attention, however in the last ten to fifteen years this picture has clearly changed and we now witness and increasing number of studies examining the role of emotions on nearly all aspects of everyday cognition, especially I want to tell about the role of emotion in education. In fact, Robert Sylwester said that  new developments in cognitive science are unraveling the mysteries of emotions; the findings have much to teach us about how students do—or do not—learn.

   Before we think about how emotion is related to education, let's think about the history of learning and psychology which help us to understand it. Learning has changed from the perspective of psychology. (#Brian Butterworth) Think about B. F. Skinner's behaviorism, in the beginning of the last century behaviorism came to the fore of scientific investigations. The first behaviorists considered the brain an uninteresting black box, from which the only interesting output was the behavior; where, in the final analysis, subjective experience can be described simply as patterns of provided proper reward and punishment is administered.(Skineer, 1938; Thorndike, 1911). From this viewpoint, there has been a lot of educational reinforcement; incentives to make students study hard. However, to a large extent behaviorists are misguided to think that conditioning can describe all learning processes in the human brain.  In fact,  much learning started to depend on internal motivation and emotion rather than external reward. It's time to change such old-fashioned educational approach.


 Cognitive neuroscience has demonstrated the relationship between emotion and learning. (Christian Gerlach)
 1. Emotions play a regulatory role in memory consolidation. In fact, the atmosphere in which students get knowledge is important for knowledge acquisition. For example, negative emotions and stress can disrupt optimal learning. However, some experts(Reinhard Pekrun) argue that the idea that positive emotions are always have positive effects and negative emotions always have negative effects is not correct. Certain negative emotions such as anxiety, shame, and anger can enhance performance in specific cases. Although these good point, I suggest that their average affects across students are negative. Quite some students have negative attitude toward learning especially when they have experienced fail in learning.  These children are likely to develop a phobia and prevalence of anxiety of depression that lead to late development. 
 2. Emotion bias our cognitive information processing style. Such biases can differ in important respects. For example, selective encoding of threat cues at early stages of processing appears to be more characteristic of vulnerability to anxiety, whereas depression is associated with selective attention to mood-consistent stimuli when presentation conditions are helpful to strategic processing.
 3. Emotion constitutes a vital part of decision making, even when it is based on rational cost-benefit analysis. The unique social information conveyed by each discrete emotion. In decision making, individuals use interdependent others' emotional expressions to make sense of ambiguous and uncertain social situations, and the cooperative or competitive nature of the social situation fundamentally influences the interpersonal effects of emotions. 
 According to the evidence 1 and 2 (not 3 because I judged evidence 3 doesn't have to do with learning fundamentally), positive emotions are better at leading to effective learning than negative emotions in terms of memory consolidation and information processing style. Therefore, as a teacher, we should try to  create a better atmosphere to produce students' positive emotions.

 These following factors that are under the control of educators likely are important for the development of students' emotions. (Reinhard Pekrun; Zeidner)

 First, improve students' perceived control. Lack of structure, clarity, and excessive task demands are factors that enhance students' anxiety. Therefore, you should structure instructions well and explain clearly. By implication, adaptive student emotions likely can be fostered, and maladaptive emotions reduced, by raising the cognitive quality of instruction.
 Second, support autonomy and self-regulated learning. Learning environments supporting students' self-regulated learning can be assumed to increase their sense of control and related positive emotions. In addition, such environments can foster positive emotions by meeting students' need for autonomy. However, these beneficial effects probably depend on the match between students' competence and individual need for academic autonomy. In case of a mismatch, loss of control and negative emotions can result. In short, teachers should attend to matching demands for autonomy to students' competencies and needs.
 Third, set goal structures and achievement expectations carefully. Goal structures and grading practices determine students' opportunities for experiencing success and perceiving control, thus influencing their emotions. Specifically, competitive goal structures imply that some students experience success, whereas others have to experience failure, thus increasing levels of anxiety and hopelessness. Therefore, educators should adapt expectancy to students' competencies and should refrain from using goal structures which induce individual competition between students.
 Finally, give feedback and consequences of achievement. Research suggests that cumulative failure feedback is a major factor underlying students' test anxiety (Zeidner, 1998). Success experiences likely strengthen perceived control and related positive emotions, whereas repeated failure can undermine subjective control and, therefore, instigate negative emotions. In addition, the perceived consequences of success and failure are important. Positive future-related student emotions can be increased if academic success is seen to produce beneficial long-term outcomes (such as future occupational chances). Negative outcomes of academic failure, by contrast, can increase students' achievement-related anxiety and hopelessness. By implication, providing success experiences, defining mistakes as opportunities for learning rather than as personal failure, and linking attainment to beneficial outcomes also is important for helping students to develop adaptive emotions.
 Given these facts, we could know that students' various emotions affect the lesson and teachers can lead the proper feeling for learning. 

It is certain that there will be a few opponents of my opinion although it is not popular because the power of emotion has been proved for many other aspects. However, some people would wonder that can we really control our emotions and can teachers lead the emotions of students. Many people would say not; we cannot control our emotion. This is because they think of emotion as arising out of the blue, unbidden, with a life of its own. How could one will oneself to feel love, happy, or any other emotion? It would seem that emotions are just not the kinds of things that can be willed into existence.
It becomes concern only when we try to imagine a single person regulating his or her own emotions.(James Gross) In this case, we should consider interaction between brain systems and we should distinguish the subject which controls the emotion from the subject which is controlled emotion. However, if something is being regulated, it isn't much of a mystery because the subjects are explicit. Given this example, teacher calms an out-of-control child in the classroom. Teachers can change the atmosphere of the class from disturbance to calmness, and it affects the mood of children. Although all of the children's feeling were not changed, emotional contagion( the tendency for two individuals to emotionally converge) can occur. The other way to change students' feeling that can be explained by using emotional contagion and observational learning is that teachers' own enthusiasm can facilitate students' adoption of positive emotions. Emotional contagion occurs not only between students but also between teacher and student. According to the research on emotional contagion in the classroom(Timothy P. Motet, Steven A. Bebe), students' emotional responses are positvely related to the perceived emotional responses of their instructor. To sum up, we can control the emotions; the emotions can be also controlled by others and teachers can lead proper feelings for effective learning by manipulating atmosphere and intending to emotional contagion.

Students learn and teachers should help students to learn in the most effective way. That's what teachers should do. In the past, teachers used to give some incentives to students to enhance their motives and performance. However, many experiments have proved that students learning is not related to external reward, but it is related to internal reward. In addition, it is a recent trend that scientists are paying attention to the power of emotion and it is time for teachers to change. Consider this; why same student do work well some day while he or she performs poorly some day? The degree of study of a student is not always same because learning depends on emotion. Emotions play a regulatory role in memory consolidation and information processing style. And of course it has an effect on concentration and motivation as we basically know. Emotion, the basic facts of human, is a feeling such as happinesslovefearangeror hatredwhich can be caused by the situation that you are in or the people you are with. What does it mean? People(included you) can intend to change someone's emotion. You might be embarrassed when the students don't concentrate on their work and your lesson. Use those instructions in your class and you don't have to worry anymore. Try to catch students' emotions and follow the instructions, it is the best way to help children to save time otherwise they spend uselessly, growing effectiveness of learning. How easy it is to become a great teacher!